My patch of sky (a Ya~Du) (Poem of the Week 12/04/05)
Music:Evening FallsEnyaYa~Du is a Burmese poetry form(Ya~Du parameters)I hope I got it right
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This is great, Joel. I'm not familiar with the form. Could you give us the parameters?A
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This is super, Joel Especially after reading the parameters...lol.. now I'm really confused! Your patch of sky has been cloudy more than clear lately. That's Michigan weather for you, ya never know...
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AnnetteA Ya~Du has 5 lines.The first 4 lines have 4 syllables per line, and the fifth line can have 5, 7, 9 or 11 syllables.Lines 4 and 5 rhyme in the normal fashion. (sight and night)The first 3...
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Thanks, Joel. I appreciate you going to such trouble to spell out the params. I didn't see your link in your initial post. Much appreciated. Looks really tough! Annette
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AnnetteI was frustrated by the clouds that were playing hide and seek with my stars and thought I needed a diversion. I chose this form because it sounded very difficult. I was right.Like I said a...
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I think you did a wonderful job of this Joelsz. I've studied it for awhile and now I've attempted to do one. Mine is called Summer Rain. Thanks for explaining how to do it. I like trying something new.
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This felt like what I see at night from home - the sky has always held a fascination for me, most especially at night. I think I'm going to hasve to learn this form, it seems to me it has a lot of...
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Joel, This is outstanding, and the music is something that is soothing to the spirit as it plays. Thank you for sharing this. Congratulations on the win. Wanda
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Congratulations, Joel! A positively stellar win!DanWords are the mind's bridge - it's connection to all the universe.Love is the heart's bridge - it's connection to all other souls.Loving words can...
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Carefully crafted Joelz and well worth the effort ivor
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